Unit 11
Writing Exercise - Part 2

 
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Memorandum: results of information-gathering for a conference site 

      Below is the memo with an analysis of its component parts: 

Proper memo format

To:     Mr./Ms first and last names of addressee, job title                                   Date
          section, division, department                                                                       file name
From: first and last name of sender, job title
            section, division, department
Subject: concise, focused description (with only the first letter of first word and proper names capitalized)

Paragraph 1: Clear, concise statement of memo's purpose


1)     " I am writing to inform you of the results of my efforts to gather information on two possible sites for a World Heritage Conference. As you know, ... of Nova Scotia.After all the conference organizers have read this memo, they can discuss the results and offer opinions as to which locale would be preferrable at our next planners meeting." 

Paragraph 2/3: Background information (just enough to provide a meaningful context for the announcement -- depending on quantity of information gathered; in this case, information on two possible conference sites is supplied, with one paragraph devoted to the description of each) 

2) "Quebec City is the capital of the province that is the first French settlement in North  America, which started back in the year 1608.  Old Quebec became a UNESCO World Heritage site in 1985. The old city has ... at the next meeting). It is in the heart of the old city and leads to historic streets such as Rue Saint-Louis and Saint-Ursule."

3) "The other possible location, Lunenberg,  Nova Scotia is the site of a historic fishing village dating back to the year 1753 when it was first settled by Dutch, German ... a World Heritage site.  Just several blocks from Lunenberg’s most historic area, one or two  modern hotels with conference facilities are readily available to serve as venues (details of each will be supplied at the next meeting)."

Paragraph 4: Summary statement of information in previous paragraphs

4) "The settings of both Quebec City and Lunenberg offer inspiring settings for a meeting conference of our UNESCO World Heritage group. I look forward to gathering with all the organizers at next week’s planners’ meeting so that we can share our responses and input."

Paragraph 5: Thanking the addressee(s)

5) "Thank you for your attention to this important matter."

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